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Showing posts with label Death by Darksper. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Death by Darksper. Show all posts

Friday, April 9



So, here we are. The last day of our contest week and we are sad to see it go. This has been so much fun for all of us and again, I want to thank everyone who participated in it and making it a great success. It still blows my mind that it was so big being our first contest. (We grovel to you readers and writers)

Now, we are on to our voting round winner, the big cheese, the cream of the crop. We had so many votes, it blew my mind. I didn't expect to see so many people to show interest and you all ran out and read and reviewed and voted and this is your winner for the big tamale... (in other words, here is the winner)

Congratulations again to

 Gemmalisa
for 
One Hell of a Forever




We had the opportunity to interview her and get into her dark little head a bit and we will in a moment, but first we wanted to give our two cents worth of beans about what we thought of this fic. 




I think I cried out all my tears on this one.

It was awesomesauce, totes!! Jasper taking off Rosalie's arm and

beating her with it... I died.... *cries* Edward dry humping his
piano... *grins*
That was just priceless, even without Jasper's "help" it would have
been hysterical. There was seriousness in here but at times, I think
but it was just too damn comical. That is how you know it is great,
when you can't stop reading and laughing when you should be disturbed.
*shrugs* I love the way it is all balanced and you did a Great Job!





This is the story of what happens when Jasper has his sights set on something. Let's just say that determination is an understatement and some surprising lives will be lost. This was an epic o/s, topping out at over 10,000 words, so it contains a well-written, strong plot. You won't believe the things Jasper does in this one. I had to read it twice! Obviously many agree with me since it won the voter's pick. The author also writes about a particular piano scene that displays Jasper's power in a way that I have never seen it used before. You have to read it for yourself.




I found myself on the edge of my seat during this one. It was unreal. One of the things that I found highly disturbing about this contest was how many of these stories made me laugh. How fucked up is that? And this fic here was no exception because I laughed so hard I about pissed myself. Eddie and Piano lovin... that's all I'm sayin'. I was also floored by how easy going this all was. I found myself wanting Jasper to rip them all apart and throw them in a fire, and that is unbelievable. I loved how she portrayed the Cullen's as being so messed up and not the perfect family like most of us see them. I was a bundle of anticipation, just waiting to see what secrets we would uncover next. 


Thank you again to GemmaLisa for the taking the time out to answer a few of our questions. Here is what she told us about herself and the contest. 



DT: 
 Tell us about yourself... 




Gem:
Well...I'm a 28yr old stay at home mum of two daughters, my town is pretty much the English version of Forks...although we get a little more sunshine.  I spend my days with my kids...studiously ignoring any housework that needs to be done in order to keep up with the gargantuan amount of fics that I read.  



I came to the Twilight Saga via the film...I knew about the books before hand (by 'knew' I mean constantly ordered to read them and threatened with bodily harm if I continued to ignore her...thank you sister dear.) but i wanted to watch the film first.  Because I am stubborn and I hate it when films deviate from the books...so I played safe.  Of course once I started reading I didn't stop, and let me tell you...breastfeeding whilst trying to hold onto the huge hard back copy of 'Breaking Dawn' is no easy task.

My introduction to Fanfiction was also via my sister, whose obsession became known to me only when she gave up asking me to read some of it and literally dragged me to her computer and forced me to sit down.  And I've pretty much been there ever since LOL.


DT:
 What do you like about the Darker side of Jasper?



Gem:

Oh god...what is there not to like?!  Jasper begs to be such an emotive character and that translates so well into the ultimate bad boy persona...and who doesn't want to be the one that tames the monster?  I love the idea that he has that one person that he would do anything for, that there are no boundaries if he loves you.  Yet you are safe in the knowledge that he can and will kick the shit out of anyone that bothers you.  Or murder half his family...lol.  Not forgetting the undeniable fact that he is incredibly sexy...with a gift that women would kill to take advantage of and that accent?  Oh yes please!


DT:
What are some of your favorite Darksper stories? Or Dark stories in general?



Gem:

Pfft...we could be here all day lol.  'The Scent of Fear' by VampishVixen is definitely one of my favorites, 'Bound by Promises' by JaspersIzzy has me itching for the next chapter, 'Who Are You?' by Baruka Athena captures you so easily  I love when the Major comes out to play in JamesRamsey's 'Insecurities' and when Mynxi's 'Saving Bella' has Jasper dragging Bella out of the darkness that Edward left her in and Jasper's Black Rose writes a wonderful Darksper.  Another favorite of mine is 'Wanted' by Anadabyel, funny as hell and she rocks the Bad Boy Jasper.  Jasper's Sex Kitten has a definite talent for playing with dark characters and I am loving 'Innocence Lost' and Cullen818's Darkward and I am holding out for Idreamofeddy to finish off 'Breathless Hunger'.  That is not all of them by far, my obsession knows no bounds.
(NOTE from IZZY: This girl has good taste in fics)


DT:
 You killed off some of the Cullen's, but not all in this OS. What possessed you to choose some and not others? 



Gem:

To be honest, my first thoughts when I decided to write this was that I was going to kill them all off...but I just couldn't do it lol.  I wanted a more morally ambiguous Cullen Family and a murder spree, so I had to pick and choose who would still be around at the end.  Jasper wanted Bella...so those in opposition had to die.  Alice...well there was no question that she would be the first to go.  I wanted her murder to be the catalyst for the rest, with her out of the way Jasper didn't need to worry about anyone scuppering his plans.  Rose was just too easy to kill off I'm afraid, especially when I wanted a free and easy Emmett.  Of course Edward was a given, but I liked that Bella was the one to rip him apart...he probably even enjoyed it.  Carlisle and Esme...they were safe because I love them and a naughty Carlisle is always a Carlisle that you keep lol, and I am desperate for a less than motherly Esme.  



DT:
 How did you come up with that "Eddie getting off on the piano" scene? That had us all in stitches. 

(Izzy's Favorite question) 


Gem:

LOL.  Well...I needed something that would mortify poor Edward enough that he would leave and give the rest some worthy entertainment and demonstrate the power that Jasper wields, I was also hoping for a laugh for the readers.  Not to mention a little revenge for Bella.  It was the fact that he was always able to play the piano without damaging the keys and yet he steadfastly refuses to touch Bella for fear of hurting her.  So therefore the love affair with the big, black, shiny piano was born.  


DT:
 Do you have any other Darksper stories or have plans to write more?


Gem:
This is the first thing that I have actually posted, but I do have another one in the pipeline...it just needs refining.  I have found that I find it easier to write from the dark side as apposed to fluff...don't know what that says about me so I'm choosing to gloss over it LOL.


DT:

 What gives you inspiration to write "Dark"?

Gem:

Lets just say that if the fate of the world rested on my shoulders, that if my choice not to go with the sexy arsed evil guy is what would tip the balance in humanities favor...then you'd all be royally screwed.  lol.

Actually, this OS is the first dark fic that I have written...but I loved it!  It was so freeing, and just so much fun!  As soon as I saw the details of the contest I was inspired to write...it just took me a while to gather the courage together to actually send it in.  So major thanks go to my sister (Jazz2305) and Mynxi for telling me, in no uncertain terms, that I was to just send it in already. 


DT:
Feel free to give us your thoughts on the contest and other info such as where we can find your work and anything else you might do in the fandom.


Gem:
I loved this contest, anything that gives me my Darksper fix is a win in my book. The other entries were so good, I enjoyed reading them all...even when they caused me to cringe and cover my eyes at descriptions of eye lid removal. 

I will definitely be writing more, I may even do something else with 'One Hell Of a Forever'...though I doubt it will be a multi chapter fic, but we'll see.  


Thanks for your awesome interview and we are so excited to get into your head a little and get to know you better. 

We hope you all had fun with the contest and we look forward to doing another one in the future. We have some awesome ideas for our dark loving friends, and we can't wait to bring them to you. 
Until next time kiddies...


Thursday, April 8

Death by Darksper Contest Week... Not by my Hand by Luke's Momma




Today we are featuring our Honorable Mention. This story was amazing and we couldn't not give it props for it's originality. It was a twist on the whole Death by Darksper idea and it blew me away.  
So we each have a little something to say about it, and we hope you run to read it if you haven't already. 

*click banner to read the story*

Not by My Hand
by Luke's Momma

Summary: Jasper is bored and needs a 'lab rat' to test if he wants Alice dead. But Edward reads his thoughts and Alice has her visions. There must be a way around both surely? Bella is merely a human of no consequence so why not test his theories on her? It's not as if it will affect him right? Has anyone ever truly known Jasper's and what he is really capable of?


This was an entry fot the Death by Darksper Contest and it honestly
has to be the most original though an concept I have seen. There was a
depth to it that was understated but so easy to follow.

-- Now that was just a fuckin' insult. I mean please. Do they not
realise that I'm the fuckin' God of War? Do they not understand how
many newborns I've actually created an' the strength of will that shit
took? If I couldn't control myself in the heat of battle then there'd
be a whole lot more Goddamn dead people instead of blood sucking
vampires.--

All I can say to that piece of this is *ded* It gave me chills, I
could so picture his face when this was said. The fact that you can
get so into it and have a mini movie playing in your head (well in
mine anyway) was just perfection. It was a great read... the parting
lines will forever be inbedded in my twisted little brain thatnks to
Luke's Momma....


"D'you think I'd lose my shit over some little gal? Some human gal?
That's just a fuckin' insult. I mean please, Peter I'm the fuckin' God
of War!"

Raising an eyebrow he spoke softly.

"I know shit Major. Re-fuckin'-member?"


Holy Hell, batman... Major indeed... *ded* Great Job Nikki






This o/s stuck with me. It was well-written and surprisingly developed for such a short fic. It was creative and original, and most definitely deserves an honorable mention. And, since I'm on a Peter kick lately, I thoroughly enjoyed his presence.
This fic displays Jasper's gift in a way that I've never seen it used before. His power over Bella is captivating to say the least. This is a chilling story that will leave a huge impression on you in the end. It's dark and dire, but if you're on this blog or in this C-2 then that's what you're looking for. This is one of those stories that will stay with you.




This OS blew me away when I read it. It was so original and just fucking awesome. I loved how Jasper had such an influence over Bella and worked it to get what he wanted. It was just one of those stories that you think you know what is going on until you get to the end and your all "WTF just happened?" and half to go back and read it again, excited. 

This story was so dark and twisted and you didn't even know it till the end. I beg you to read it if you haven't already. It is so worth it and it deserved this honorable mention for being so wicked in it's own very creative way. 


Wednesday, April 7

Death by Darksper Contest Week... The Musings of a Deranged Mind by EmraePenne


And here we are again, for another Judges Pick for the Death by Darksper contest. 
We have two more days of goodies for you and hope you come back to see the stories we have left this week. 

So, my pick was for Musings of a Deranged Mind by EmraePenne. 


*click banner to read the story*


Here are my thoughts on this awesome OS. 

Musings of a Deranged Mind 
by
EmraePenne

A journal, a memoir, a look into the depths of a
deranged mind. Jasper's mind is a dark place full of hate and death;
and that's when he's alone, when the voices come out to play...no one
is safe.

I know, first off, it's a Jasper/Alice. Yeah, big no no for me, but every single one of the Jasper/Alice stories entered here were beyond wonderful. That's saying a lot coming from me, and this OS was no exception. It is very very dark and not just that, it's disturbing. It's not for the faint of heart and if you have a weak stomach, it's not for you. I on the other hand, hung to every word. 

I was instantly intrigued by this story as it is written as several journal entries from Jasper's mind. He is human and obviously insane, so much so it sent chills up my spine to think of just how fucked up he really is. Hearing voices inside of his head, telling him to do very very bad things to people, he kills his doctor from where he is being held and her staff, escaping into the free world. 

He is intrigued by a file of a young girl named Alice, whose file he got a peak of before he killed his doctor, and goes to her rescue. After he rescues her from her own locked up hell, she turns out to be just as fucked up as he is, which makes it all too awesome. At least it's not just him and his crazy ass voices in his head. 

They travel around killing and just being psychotic which is frightening to think about real people in the world like these two. *shivers* They soon find themselves in Port Angeles, in the company of a young couple and Jasper remembers his time killing his doctor and her staff. 

I fear for them at this point, because we all know they are going to die, but there is an awesome twist to their death that makes you want to look at your neighbors a little closer. 

I don't want to spoil it with anymore than I already have, but I have to say that my favorite part of this fic was when he thought back to what he did to his doctor and her staff. Yeah, I keep coming back to that, because distrubingly, it had me laughing and cringing at the same time. The way he strings up the people, decorating the place with their body parts and thinking it looked like Christmas... I about lost it.

So I want to say, Good Job to you EmraePenne for this awesome and dark OS, and to you dear readers, please give it a try. It was amazing. 




Tuesday, April 6


Today we are featuring another one of the most awesome OS's entered into the Death by Darksper contest. We will do this each day this week to give a little bit of what we thought of each of them and a special author interview with Gemmalisa, voting round winner, at the end of the week. 

So, In the meantime, check out Cullen818's pick, and it was fantastic.
She went with Soldier Rising: Tales of the Ripper. 

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This is what she had to say...


Soldier Rising - Tales of the Ripper
by KrisCullen

Summary:  As an underdog Jasper undergoes an Induction into one of the most powerful families around.  Will the task he has to complete be enough to earn a spot within the family? Rated M for Violence.


This was a contest that asked for murder by Darksper and this fic certainly delivered. In order to move up in the ranks of the Luciano family, Jasper needed to prove himself by taking the life of a rival family member. At the start of the fic, the reader gets the impression that he may be apprehensive about the task he is going to perform, but through the writing the author does a fantastic job of letting us see just how determined he can be at his new job. I actually felt like this was how a hit man would be in this type of setting. The story was dark, creative and interesting. I'd like to see it continued because Jasper as a mob hit man kind of does it for me.




Monday, April 5

Death by Darksper Contest Week.. Vengeance is Mind by Sparabella


This week we are devoting our time to the contest and it's stories. We have each picked one of our favorites out of the lot of fantastic stories that were entered, and written up some thought about it. We hope you enjoy the stories and if you haven't read them yet, run over and do so. They are great. 

So, today we are starting out with Jaspers Sex Kitten's pick, Vengeance is Mine which was written Sparabella, a collab between Sparagus and Clurrabella. 


*click the banner for story*

Here is what she had to say about this fantastic story...

VENGANCE IS MINE
by Sparabella

Summary: Plagued with grief and despair, Jasper sets out to avenge the
deaths of those close to him. When he's surprised by the presence of
someone he thought he would never see again, his world spirals out of
his control.

This was an Entry for the Death by Darksper Contest and I was in love
from word one. Jasper on the hunt for what he wanted. His
determination to get to "her" was great. Then the Major came out to
play and I died... *ded* It was intense and you had me on the edge of
my seat. My mind was rolling over the possibilities... can he do this?
Is it enough to fight for her alone. The we get to the lemon...
Domsper *ded*

--- My voice was no longer my own, but a possessed, focused growl of a
monster lusting for his prey. Anger overhauled any sense of the soft,
safe emotions that I'd felt only moments earlier. I hated her. I hated
him. I hated Alice, and I was alone. Because of all of them, I would
never be happy again. ---

It was hot and just all sorts of awesome. and then for him to turn his
back on her... I actually laughed
and my exact words to myself were, Hot Damn, you go soldier boy! Then
hysterical giggling. Great Job!