"What is Dark?"

What is a Dark Fic? That is a question I get a lot. It is all up to the way we view something. Dark is or can be a variety of events. OOC moments that are out of the norm can be dark. I have compiled a few examples of what I consider dark (from my dark fics). Keep in mind my view of dark isn't the same as my neighbors.


This is a "minimally dark" section of a chapter 12 of What Lies WithIn...

The closer I got to the house, the more anxious I was feeling. It was if someone was trying to tell me something. I pulled into the driveway and that's when I saw him.

I slammed on the brakes and tried to get my phone out of my pocket. I had no chance to get away I had to try and get Emmett. Hopefully he'd answer this time.

The phone started ringing as I was being pulled from the truck. "Hello, love, I've missed you, why do you smell like a wet dog?"

"Get the fuck away from me, Edward," I screamed.

"Now is that anyway for a lady to talk, really, Bella, you should know better," he sneered.

"What did you expect, she is just a stupid human?" Rosalie said, stepping out of the tree line.

Fuck me... this is so not good.

"Why are you two here? What in the fuck do you want?" I said, still yelling.

"I told you, Bella, I missed you and I want you to come with me and Rose. We can all be good together," he said, kissing down my neck and rubbing himself into me.

"Yeah, I can show you how to please a man. You apparently are lacking in a few departments," Rosalie sneered.

Oh, I really hated this bitch... I was trying to fight Edward off but it was no use. I was starting to shake with anger. I should not speak when I am angry but they were just pissing me the fuck off.

"Emmett seems to be happy with me. Happier than he was with you, you stupid whore!" I yelled, angry tears falling from my eyes.

I know it is not good to antagonize a vampire but if I was going to die I was going down with a fight. She grabbed my arm and flung me into the side of the truck. The world went to spinning as I felt pains shoot through my body. I was fighting to stay conscious. Then I hear a roaring growl and it was black.


--- Edward acting totally out of the "normal" neurotic manner he is dark ---


This is from Desired Distraction (Darksper)...

I could feel his curiosity but I ignored it. The bell finally rang and we headed for our classes. The day went by fast enough for us but all time was staled as it really meant nothing to us. My day was spent thinking of the beauty I had laid my eyes on this morning. I imagined running my hands across her body and slipping my tongue into her.

What would her body look like under mine, as I fucked her until she screamed my name. Maybe I could just bite her, not inject venom, but just bite her. I wanted to mark her as mine.

The final bell rang and I met my family out by our vehicles after school. We were going on a family hunt as we had done at the beginning of every other school year no matter the school we attended. Traditions were sacred to Esme. A scent hit my nostrils and I whipped around as the venom filled my mouth. I swallowed it back as I saw her standing at her truck. Taking her back backpack and jacket off and throwing them across the seat. She leaned her head back and pulled her hair into a loose ponytail.

"Bella," a blond girl called from behind her and she turned.

Her movement sent her scent wafting to me and I was lost. I felt drawn to her and the animal inside me raged. I had a mini movie playing in front of me... I grab her and hold her close. Ripping her clothes off as I slam my rock hard dick into her. As she struggled against my grip, my hands would run down her back. It would be able for me to bite into her sweet flesh. I'd watch as the color drained from her body.

I heard Alice gasped and a pool of different emotions swirled around me. Thing changed from calm to terror in a matter of seconds.

"Grab him," she cried. Before it registered, I was slammed into the side of the car with Edward growling at me.

"Get off me, you asshole," I growled, back.

"What in the hell are you doing?" Emmett boomed


--- Jaspers "Dirty thought" are a dark characteristic ---


This is a piece from Hard to Handle (Darkmett)...

I moved over closing the distance between us, and crushed my lips to hers. Using my foot to slide the table up a little. I pulled Bella onto my lap, her back to my chest. I kissed her neck, slowly moving my hands down to her thighs.

If someone came around the corner, all they would see was her on my lap, but there was actually more going on. I slid my hands under her dress, and was met with naked skin.

"Miss Swan, you are a naughty girl," I growled as I slid my hands around her thighs and pulled them apart. Wanting her pussy to be open to me. She moaned as I whispered in her ear, "Bella, if you want to cum, you have to be quiet baby. Not a sound... or I will stop."

She nodded, and I moved my finger to her wet folds, sliding over them from the top bottom, letting my middle finger graze her clit.

Her hips bucked as she bit down on her lip harder, trying not to make a sound. "Good girl, Bella, if you like this nod your head," I whispered as a second finger slid inside her. Her weak whimpers were enough to make my pants get tight.

As my thumb circled her clit, my fingers worked her inside walls, curling as I went in deeper inside her. Her breathing was heavy, and her head fell back on my shoulder. I kissed her neck and sucked on the spot just behind her ear, causing her breath to hitch as marked her as mine.

"Bella," I said in a lust-riddled voice; as she ground her ass into my ever hardening cock.

"Mhmm."

"Bella, you have to sit still, or I won't be able to stop myself from fucking you right here. Is that what you want?" I hissed.

The more my fingers worked her pussy, the more she ground her ass into my dick. The pain of being so hard was making it impossible to concentrate. Her body had total control over mine and she had no idea.

I worked my fingers harder and faster inside her as her breathing picked up. Her orgasm was building. I could feel the muscles in her body as she laid back against me; tightening up.

"Do you want to cum, Bella?" I whispered as I licked the shell of her ear.

"Mhmm... yes," she stuttered.

I smiled against her neck as I pumped my fingers harder and faster, pinching her clit as her body stiffened. She grabbed my arms, squeezing them as she came around my fingers. Her breathing was erratic and her face


--- The dominating side of Emm is what made him dark along with his dirty thoughts and hot temper. The way he commanded all around him was his dark feature ---




This is from What Lies In The Dark (Darkward)...

"Tonight will be the first of many nights that I will have you my angel", I said aloud to myself, as I waited for her to settle in for the night.

I watched and waited as the hours passed. Finally, her heart rates lowed and she was breathing evenly. I crept to the tree by her house and quickly climbed it to sit outside of her window. Even if she was to wake now, with the light one, her mere human eyes wouldn't see me. I slowly crept into her room through her window and made my way to her bed. The closer I got to her, the sweeter, more desirable she smelled.

The enchanting smell, that was all Bella, made my mind travel through the many years I had been a vampire, never had I met anyone that called to me as she did. I slowly pulled her to me, her eyes fluttered open. she was staring me in the eyes, fear taking over her features and her body as she started to scream.

"Noooo, get out! Who are you?"

"Shhh, you're safe my love. I'm not here to hurt you," I whispered, as I continued to stare into her chocolate brown eyes. I felt her relax in my arms, as I dazzled her into submission.

I looked her body over as I slid my hand up her thigh, then sliding my fingers across her covered pussy, before moving up to her stomach and finally cupping her breasts. Her body and frame were small but she was fit and beautiful. She felt like soft velvet, as I made my way up to her pouty lips, pressing my lips against hers and kissing her softly. I removed her shirt so I could see her glorious body. I leaned in and kissed her breasts, causing her nipples to harden instantly with my cold breath hitting them.

"Wh...what are you..."

I looked into her eyes and she calmed down as I continued moving my hands and tongue across her body. I wanted to taste every part of her, claim her, and make her mine completely. I slowly slid up her thighs again, pulling her legs apart, and licked up to her covered pussy. Taking a deep breath, I slid my fingers under the fabric, which had been keeping me from what I wanted. The sweetness of her body was calling to me. Guiding my fingers inside her, her body fought to get away from my steel grip.

Claiming her as mine was all that mattered at that moment. She would be mine no matter the consequences. My desire was for her. The faster I moved my fingers inside her, the more she reacted to my touch, by bucking her hips into my fingers. I ripped the panties off with my teeth, moving my mouth to her slick folds, licking up to her clit, taking it into my mouth and sucking on it hard.

A few more thrusts and her body relented as she moaned. Her orgasm hitting hard and fast. The smell of her juices was driving me mad. I bit into her thigh as I licked up all of her juices. Making sure to lick the wound so it would heal. Making sure not to get any of my venom inside the wound. I was in no mood or temperament to be faced with a newborn. She laid there, panting slightly as I moved to put her shirt back on. I didn't put panties on her. I wanted to know it was open for me all night


--- This shows Edward in a dark zone. He has completely crossed into the no fly zone and has moved to the dark side. ---



An piece from Chapter 2 of Dark Desires (Darkmett)...

She was wearing a short pair of shorts and a tight tank top and my dick immediately got hard. I watched her as she ate. The way her lips moved as she sucked the noodles in, made me groan with want. I could imagine how her mouth would feel on my dick. As I watched her, she finished her meal and pulled out a book. After a few paragraphs, she blushed.

What in the hell is she reading?

She got up from her chair and went back inside. The clatter of dishes sounded for a few minutes and then I heard her go into the bathroom. The shower came on and I needed a closer look. Making sure no one would see me, I made my way up to the balcony. Her heart rate and breathing were speeding up by the second and then I heard her moan.

I silently made my way to the bathroom door and listened. She was masturbating in the shower? I didn't know if I could handle this? Alice's words rang through my head from earlier. "I want you to trust yourself." I guess this is was what she meant.

I cracked the door and had a hard time controlling myself as the scent of her arousal wafted around me; it was swallowing me whole. She was moaning in pleasure and I wanted to jump in that shower and fuck her against that wall, but I pulled those feelings back before I could. The louder her whimpers of pleasure got, the more I felt as if I was suffocating, and my hands started trembling. I had to get out of there.

As I closed the door and turned to leave I heard her breathe out my name as she came. Shocked, I darted out the door and into the woods. The need to take her was overwhelming. I couldn't believe that I had been that close to her and not attacked her. Her scent was maddening and the noises she was making had drove me over the edge. She had moaned my name, MY NAME, as she came hard. What could that mean? Did she want me too?

Still overwhelmingly hard, I took down the fist two deer I saw and replayed the moments of her in the shower over and over. I could imagine her hand sliding into her folds and dipping into her hot wet center. I couldn't get the thoughts out of my head and it made me grow harder.

Needing to relieve myself, I pulled my dick from my pants and gripped and stroked it as I thought of Bella. I imagined her small hands and tongue all over me. It wasn't long until I came with a hard jolt. Once I was done, I made my way back to the house and was met with silence. Grateful no one was home just yet, I went upstairs and took a shower. Clean and once again calm, I got dressed and stretched out across my bed. The longer I laid there the more I thought about what Jasper and Alice had said


--- This is just the dirty side of dark ---



This is a piece from My Give A Damn Is Busted (Darkella)...

That's when the voice in my head started. She was an evil little bitch and she was ready to teach Phil a lesson. I walked over to the kitchen cabinet and grabbed the sharpest knife I could find, before walking back over to him. "Now you filthy pig... I'm going to gut you. You will learn who to fuck with and who not to. But then again. you won't be able to do anything when I'm done with you," I said, smirking.

He mumbled as the fear took him over. I cut open his t-shirt and slowly ran the knife down his front.

"Now what do you want first. I will let you chose. But in the end you will die."

I listened to the voice in my head and ran the knife across one of his nipples, laughing as the blood ran down his side, watching him cringe, while he tried hard not to scream. I moved the knife across his chest multiple times, laughing and enjoying his pain and suffering. The stupid piece of shit deserved it. I worked him over, until he was a bloody mess. His voice got weaker as he panted for me to kill him and to get it over with.

I turned to look at the clock on the wall and then back to him. "As you wish, scum bag," I said, as I drove the knife through his heart. His voice dropped off, as he slumped in the chair. I went upstairs, showered and changed my clothes. I threw some clothes into a duffel bag and headed to my truck.

I left Arizona and never looked back. I would just let them think I was dead. I made my way to Forks, and Charlie had me "evaluated". I wasn't charged with anything to do with Phil's death. I passed a lie detector test and had them convinced that I left before the pig was slaughtered.

As a horn blew in the distance, I remembered why I was here. I made my way around to the back of Newton's and slipped inside. I waited in the storage room, until I knew everyone was gone. Then I slipped into the isle where he was working and cleared my throat. He gasped in surprise and turned to look at me.

"What is your problem? Jesus, you scared the crap out of me Bella," he said, coming towards me.

I took a step back and he smirked, as he stopped. "Bella, come here now," he said pointing to the floor in front of him. I slowly took a few steps forward and stopped, short of the spot.

"BELLA, now!" he growled. I moved forward and stopped where he had pointed. He grabbed me and pulled me close. "Now, you know the routine. I want you on the counter now," he said in my ear as he turned to walk to the back counter


--- This is a OOC side of Bella that has never been seen ---



Now, these are just a few examples of "dark". There are so many levels to "dark". I hope this helps the questions I get. If not I am always up to answer questions...


Enjoy...


Kitten Out!!!