Monday, May 24
Control By Kitty Cullen-03
Summary: Bella needs help sleeping after a series of nightmares keeps her awake. She asks Jasper to help. He gets a taste of control that he hasn't had in a long time-how far will he go?
Control is 24 chapters of hot Jasper. O.o Really this was the very first fic I ever read. Of course I have been a Jasper girl from the start. *laughs*
The story starts of as cannon, with Bella and Edward after they return from Italy. Poor Bella hasn't recooperated from the trauma of the Volturi and is having nightmares... they are definelty nightmare worthy... so she makes the decision to talk to Jasper about “helping” her sleep. It takes a lot for Bella to get enough courage to ask for help. Jasper is reluctant to talk to her at first, he is afraid of hurting her and that is where the fun begins.
Poor Jasper, the boy is so conflicted... to help... to not help. What is the right choice? Can he keep her dreams away? Well sure he can but is it the right choice? This chapter is filled with all osrts of Huh's and What's but it is a great beginning. Now moving on into the story itself you see where the path they have taken leads them. Jasper's choices inturn spur Alice into talking to Charlie to let Bella spend a weekend. Now this is where things pick up.
A nightmare starts and Jasper trying something new, turns her nightmare into a dream of naughty Jasper thoughs...(I so don't blame Bella, I'd have them too... *giggles*) But it turns an innocent act into a night Jasper will never forget. What happens when he takes this a step further? Can he tell her what has happened? Can he keep it from Edward, Alice, the family?
You will have to read and see. I promise you on all my Jasper love, you will love this fic. Run don't walk to it. Just remember there is a reason for it all. Concequences for your actions and always a time for a new beginning. Read on it will be an expierence. Darksper is a dreamsper *sighs*
Here is my favorite part of chapter one: (This was the hook, line and sinker for me)
"Bella, do you really think that's a good idea? And what about Edward-didn't you talk to him about this?" I was frowning at her. She stuck out her bottom lip, looking worried.
"I think it's a good idea! The dreams come as soon as I close my eyes. So...maybe if you just put me to sleep, I could stay asleep on my own. Easy. And no-I didn't ask Edward. But he knows I've been having trouble, and I'm sure he'd be okay with it." She looked down at the floor as she spoke the last line.
"Forgive me, but if he was okay with it why did you wait until he left to approach me?" I gave her a knowing look.
"Okay, you got me there. But he's gone right now, so could we just...try?" I rolled my eyes.
"As soon as he enters the house he's going to know. He may not be able to read your mind, but he certainly can read mine."
"Oh-right. Well, if he has a problem with it he can come to me. It's not like I'm risking my life-I just want to get some sleep!" She sounded exasperated, and she really did look tired. There were bags under her eyes, her hair fell limply to her shoulders, and she was paler than normal. I think I could try, at least. If I kept myself in the doorway, I could influence her across the room, and as soon as she was asleep I could leave. Edward would be mad at first, but he'd get over it quickly once he saw that it was actually helping Bella. I sighed.
"Fine. I'll help. Let's get you into Edward's room. I'll stay near the door, and as soon as you go to sleep I'm leaving." I didn't want to sound bitter, but she just smelled so good...she danced away, smiling, all the way to Edward's room. She curled up under the covers in record time, not even bothering to change clothes. I kept my distance, and it wasn't so bad here. "Close your eyes," I commanded. I sent her an extremely powerful wave of lethergy. It worked almost instantaneously. Her body releaxed, and within minutes she was snoring. I made sure she was in a deep sleep and then turned to leave the room.
Also, READ IT!!!! Dewww ettttttt there are plenty of road bumps, surprises and a fuck hawt ending to keep you entertained. *looks serious* Would Kitten lie to you... NO!!!!
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