by writer-person-thingy
This fic was an o/s done as a contest entry for: Moon from Venus_fiction's Apple a Day challenge. It is a short piece that is full of mystery. I love how she took the characters and made you actually see into their minds. No names being mention in my opinion is the best way to go in this one. It helps add to the allure and the underlying presence of danger. The dark one, Carlisle never seeing his name but knowing its him made my skin crawl. It is a fascinating way to write and again very captivating.
“”The man inside the man is nearly sick at his own arousal to this; but the demon in control doesn't hear as he grins into the kiss—or assault, depending on the point of view, but he didn't mind that. His fingers were splaying, feeling every warm centimeter of her lower parts; his pinkie finger just touching her navel, his thumb brushing the part of her he was after. And his ring finger on the part of her he wanted so to taste, touch—but of course the ring finger is no longer called that, being that its counterpart lay glinting gold in the grass, forgotten.”
*shivers* Okay this is what I mean people, you know it’s there, you can feel it, you can hear it... but you don’t at the same time. *laughs* It is very decriptive, which honestly is what more people need to pay attention too. They make their fics wordy but have no back bone. Take mine as a certain person tells me (SweetT129 *smirks*) I have a problem with rambling on and on about the details, but the detail are what catch your attention.
So the randomness of this fic overwhelms me.... Yes as you know I am very random but this one fascinates me. IDK its just a great way of writing and conveying a story. This is a must read. Short, sweet and totally fucking awesome.
Now scurry your little asses on as Kitten said and go read... Enjoy and don’t forget to review once you read... I did.
Kitten Out...
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