Kitten Rec's "The Monster Within by Lady Tazz

This is a very special rec. For two reasons one this is something that cupcake (Lady Tazz) has never done before. And she kicked ass. *laughs*


This was a challenge that was brought up one night on g-chat after one of our meeting. The gauntlet was thrown and by George Cupcake picked it up and threw it back. Izzy had to write fluff *dies laughing* (which she did and it was awesome) and Cupcake had to do Darkward.




The Monster within by Lady Tazz


Summary: What 'if' Edward was not so forgiving about Bella asking Jake to kiss before the newborn fight. Warning this is a DARKWARD!


Author Notes: This was written as a challenge. Jaspers Izzy is a DARK writer and she wrote cannon fluff. So If Izzy can write fluff Cupcake (that's me) can write dark, and so the DARK challenge was born. So this is A DARK fic (Yes, I'm saying it one more time) – not my usual fluff – so if you don't like DARK DON'T read, m'kay!


Warning: This is Dark and there is beloved character death and adult sexual content. If you continue to read after these warnings, you have no right to flame me.


Her are my guidelines from Izzy herself:
1. It has to be 3,000 words
2. NO FLUFF OF ANY KIND - *sighs*
3. Edward must kill Bella -*cries*
4. All smut must be hardcore fucking
5. I have to use the word fuck at least 10 times.


Now with that in mind I say this:


It was exciting cuz as you all should know by now Kitten isn't an Edward fan unless his sick ass is dark. I love the scene she chose. It was the one in the book that had me torn. I was like there is no way in hell this jackass was going to let her actually let him or her get away with this. But I didn't write it so who am I to say it was wack.


Cupcake took it and darkhoored it and its just totally awesome. The way Bella begs for Edward to make her forget *snorts* Omg! I so love it. Really and truly what man is going to say no to an emotionally torn woman. If she is offering it up. *smh*


"I push into her hot wet pussy over and over again. I think I hear her scream out in pain, but I'm not sure. Her pussy is hot and tight, so tight around my cock it feels so fucking good. I pick up the pace, pushing harder and harder until I feel my orgasm start to build. Never in my many years have I felt such pleasure. I bend down to kiss her neck. All I can think is mine, mine, mine.


I bit into her neck and suck her blood as my cock continues to move inside her pussy, all the while the word mine was like a mantra in my head. As I continue to suck, I can feel my prey go lifeless under me, and with a few more thrusts, I come so amazingly hard, it's euphoric. I roll over and collapse, completely and utterly satisfied."


I asked in my review if it was bad that I laughed when he bit Bella? Well it probably was but come on she asked for it. And Cupcake delivered it. This o/s really has all the basics of a Dark fic. Izzy outlined and Cupcake filled it in.


Click the link I dare you...
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6353423/1/The_Monster_Within


So I say go read it. You will love it and leave Cupcake some love. She deserves it.


Until next time I say Audios and Dark readings to you all...


Kitten OUT!!